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Paradise

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Out in the moonlight
I open my eyes
To a beautiful paradise

Where the air is real
And the fireflies
Swim throughout the sky

Wish I could stay all night

Where my head is clear
And we have no fear
With your breath on mine
A sight so refine
Out in our paradise

Out in the moonlight
I open my heart
To a beautiful paradise

Where the love is real
And the fireflies
Swim throughout the night

Out in our paradise

Where my head is clear
And we have no fear
With your hand on mine
A sight so refine
In our paradise

In our paradise
We are free
As we count the stars
We are free, yeah
We are free

Out in our paradise
This is another song attempt that I wrote, on the opposite end of the other one. I can hear this one in my head too, with a male and female singing tighter certain spots. But again, i'm not sure how well it translates into the writing. Hope you like
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Lady-LaClaire's avatar
Would you mind if I tried? I live to compose when I have a spare moment.